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Last Words

May 28, 2015
By ZbobSmith GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
ZbobSmith GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Pain demands to be felt.


The last words uttered from your mouth,

Held so much power and we fell South.

 

Those words for this eternal endeavor,

To change our lives forever. 

 

Those were the last words until infinity for you,

The last words until oblivion for me too.

 

Those last two words everyone knew,

Were the symbolic traditional phrase, "I do."


The author's comments:

Hey! I'm knew and I just got an account so this is my first published work. I am taking a Creative Writing class and our prompt was, "Last Words." I usually dwell in the negative emotions so I tried out something happy and enjoyed the outcome. Hope you like it and don't be too harsh! ????


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ZbobSmith GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2015 at 12:08 am
ZbobSmith GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain demands to be felt.

Sorry! Must have been tired when I wrote the note. *new