Shooting Star

January 15, 2009
By Muh-ree-uh PLATINUM, Springboro, Ohio
Muh-ree-uh PLATINUM, Springboro, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"This one's for the girls who have ever had a broken heart, who have wished upon a shooting star, you're beautiful the way you are..."
-Martina McBride

Hand in Hand,
We gaze up at the sky.

Arm and Arm,
We stand there motionless.

Grin and Grin,
We chuckle at jokes.

Eye and Eye,
We watch the stars fly.

Ear and Ear,
We listen to one another’s wishes.

His hand,
My hand,
The sky.

His arm,
My arm,

His grin,
My grin,

His eye,
My eye,
Stars fly.

His ear,
My ear,

Time may fly…
Years go by.
You and I
We’ll stay nigh.

I’ll be here for you.
You’ll be there for me.
We will be together one day.
You will see.

You are my shooting star.
Then. Now. Forever.

The author's comments:
Dedicated to a Special Friend.

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This article has 8 comments.

Writer_gal said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 9:48 pm
Nicely done, Maria! Often in writing the principle "less is best" holds true. This poem clearly reflects that. Good economy of words and nice flow.

on Aug. 7 2009 at 4:21 pm
you rock i love your details on the poerty. keep being talented....or i will!

cool said...
on Feb. 9 2009 at 11:24 pm

Conveys a clear message with a minumum of words.It's clever! How'd you think of it? Always knew you were smart.

Shorty2013 said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 9:17 pm
OMG MARIA!!! love it! beautiful! but where on earth did the inspiration come you dawg. lol. jk.....i love it

bam-bam said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 8:06 pm
I luv the poem that u wrote. u have great originality! Who was ur inspiration? i think u r very talented! You are 100% completely my favorite author on this website...

I hope to see this poem in the magazine!!! it is truly amazing... Please keep writing and submitting. I'd love to read more of your work...

on Feb. 3 2009 at 11:24 pm
Sweetness!!! Can't believe you wrote that!!! I'm so proud of you!!!

billboy said...
on Feb. 2 2009 at 3:34 am
You have a fine ability to express yourself with great originality!

turtle said...
on Feb. 1 2009 at 7:35 pm
Wow! Amazing poem! How'd it get picked out of all the others? That's so cool!

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