RE:flower petals

January 15, 2009
By Maritza Torres SILVER, Lorain, Ohio
Maritza Torres SILVER, Lorain, Ohio
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I,ve picked flower petals
and you haven't notice.
you text me but in
totally different in the halls

after all this time
that pile is still there
trust me i don't think
it's going anywhere

so it's gonna stay there
until you finally see
that the one you should hold
in your arms is me

so..i'll still pick off petals
from flowers one by one
and i'll keep saying those simple
words till those flowers are done.

The author's comments:
this poem i wrote as like a reply to my first poem flowers petals.and i know what its like to seethe one you like with the completely wrong person.

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on Jul. 10 2009 at 10:08 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

awww that was cute!

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