Ambiance of a Mother

January 14, 2009
By Cordero SILVER, Mount Holly, New Jersey
Cordero SILVER, Mount Holly, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
-Marilyn Monroe


Ambiance of a Mother


The joy I get,
the love I feel.
My appreciation for you
is almost surreal.

I couldn’t imagine a world without you,
a day in my life I don’t look forward to.
Your caring heart,
your cheerful soul.
Doing for others before doing for you.
You have my back through and through,
and no one can do it quite like you.

Your smile and grace can’t be replaced.
Your statuesque aura goes unsuppressed.
Loving you is never a test,
you give me the best and nothing less.

My love for you just grows and grows,
till the day that God calls us home.
I never will forget the times we shared,
like the time when you laughed cause I fell down the stairs.
Reminiscing about things we recall,
and amazed at how we survived it all.

Times got tough and our relationship was rough,
but we made it through all thanks to you.
You always know just what to do,
and I thank you for being you.

I hope you see how I truly feel,
my love for you is a big deal.
In my mind and forever on,
you’ll always be the true definition of a mom.

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem to my mother to show my appreciation to her for all that she's done for me, and contunies to do.

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mals said...
on Feb. 22 2009 at 2:23 am
Cordero...what a wonderful way to show your mother how you feel...I know she feels your LOVE

cmsd said...
on Feb. 20 2009 at 7:49 pm
Wow it is nice to see a young adult appreciate his mom at such a young age.

BPetree said...
on Feb. 14 2009 at 2:36 pm
You are blessed with the creativity to express in written words what is in your heart. You..are a special young man and I am very proud of you. Continue to share this gift with others.

dtango said...
on Feb. 13 2009 at 6:28 pm
that's very nice creative iam sure she will break down and just cry, thats my son......good job. you only have one mother

Ms. Denise said...
on Feb. 12 2009 at 1:57 pm
Cord, this is just beautiful! I know your mom is so proud of you, as am I.

on Feb. 12 2009 at 12:12 am
OH Cord. I am reading your poems in class and you have me crying like a baby. (I am sure my classmates think I am crazy but that is ok) I am so proud of you. You really just don't know how much. Please continue to write don't stop.

Mary5712 said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 7:42 pm
What a beautiful tribute to your mother! Your mom should be very proud of you and what a great person you are!!

Ms. Irene said...
on Feb. 11 2009 at 2:11 pm
Cord. you are gifted. You know I love you and I am so proud of you. The poem is beautiful.

on Feb. 2 2009 at 3:11 pm
I love this poem... it is beautiful




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