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I am alone
December 18, 2008
Hello?
Hello?
Is anyone there?
I am alone.
A kind of alone that echos off walls.
And leaves only a mimiking sound.
I am alone.
No one is with me.
Alone in my head where no one can find me.
I am alone.
What is that I see?
Do i see another someone?
No.
That is only silence saying hello.
I am alone.
© Anonymous
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This article has 6 comments.
hernandez34 said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 10:02 am
ilove it it shows alot of emotions
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 4:53 am
its sad but realy good
crazybutweird202 said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:44 pm
I love this poem its so emotional and sad, i like it
Philip_Hart BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:20 pm
Maemae has a point. A LOT of teens really feel this way. You really need to find a way to put some original aspects into your poem about loneliness. Everyone feels it differently, though many people think it feels the same. Keep trying. Work with more symbols and try to stay away from the cliche. I'm not trying to be discouraging, only trying to be helpful. Keep writing!
maemae said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 8:53 pm
it always makes me sad to see these poems.
i feel like this is just a cliche
every teenager has these same feelings;that their alone
i think you can only get a good poem if you find an original way to write the same old emotion
i feel like this is just a cliche
every teenager has these same feelings;that their alone
i think you can only get a good poem if you find an original way to write the same old emotion
i hope you enjoy it.
=)