I am alone

December 18, 2008
By Lindsey Summers, Columbia, MO

Hello?
Hello?
Is anyone there?
I am alone.
A kind of alone that echos off walls.
And leaves only a mimiking sound.
I am alone.
No one is with me.
Alone in my head where no one can find me.
I am alone.
What is that I see?
Do i see another someone?
No.
That is only silence saying hello.
I am alone.


The author's comments:
this piece comes straight from the heart.
i hope you enjoy it.
=)

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hernandez34 said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 10:02 am
ilove it  it shows alot of emotions

on Feb. 23 2011 at 4:53 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
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its sad but realy good

on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:44 pm
crazybutweird202, Blacklick, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.

I love this poem its so emotional and sad, i like it

on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:20 pm
Philip_Hart BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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Maemae has a point. A LOT of teens really feel this way. You really need to find a way to put some original aspects into your poem about loneliness. Everyone feels it differently, though many people think it feels the same. Keep trying. Work with more symbols and try to stay away from the cliche. I'm not trying to be discouraging, only trying to be helpful. Keep writing!

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 6:01 am
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
don't spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed> go out and enjoy life to the fullest

I like it it has an emotion we can all connect to

maemae said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 8:53 pm
it always makes me sad to see these poems.

i feel like this is just a cliche

every teenager has these same feelings;that their alone

i think you can only get a good poem if you find an original way to write the same old emotion


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