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I am alone

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Hello?
Hello?
Is anyone there?
I am alone.
A kind of alone that echos off walls.
And leaves only a mimiking sound.
I am alone.
No one is with me.
Alone in my head where no one can find me.
I am alone.
What is that I see?
Do i see another someone?
No.
That is only silence saying hello.
I am alone.





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hernandez34 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 10:02 am
ilove it  it shows alot of emotions
 
POET_MAN said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 4:53 am
its sad but realy good
 
crazybutweird202 said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 7:44 pm
I love this poem its so emotional and sad, i like it
 
Rachie_P. said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 6:01 am
I like it it has an emotion we can all connect to
 
maemae said...
Jan. 26, 2009 at 8:53 pm
it always makes me sad to see these poems.
i feel like this is just a cliche
every teenager has these same feelings;that their alone
i think you can only get a good poem if you find an original way to write the same old emotion
 
Philip_Hart replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 12:20 pm
Maemae has a point. A LOT of teens really feel this way. You really need to find a way to put some original aspects into your poem about loneliness. Everyone feels it differently, though many people think it feels the same. Keep trying. Work with more symbols and try to stay away from the cliche. I'm not trying to be discouraging, only trying to be helpful. Keep writing!
 
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