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always in my heart

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i wish you could see how flawless you are
your smile shines like the northern star
dark blue eyes lifting my heart above the skies
you are who you are and thats not a lie
443 days ive waited for you to say
but instead our friendship died away
changing and changing in to someone i wish i knew
finding a girl who suited the new you
dying inside seeing u together
tell her never to let go, for you are the treasure
ive waited too long, praying that you would come
the day you'd look back and say your my love
but were growing apart never to come back
remembering the days that past way too fast
the hate that u now have for me is too much to take
i know if i move on i wont have this pain
ill get over it knowing we have to be apart
but please accept the fact that your always in my heart
and as you go on, promise me youll remember
that your the only one ill love forever





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Philip_Hart said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 12:38 pm
Really good verse, Sarah. This is a poem that many can relate to and you laid it out really well with your words. I would encourage that you capitalize your "i"s and write out your "u"s. Beyond that and some other spelling, this poem is really great. I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up! And if you could, would you mind reading, critiquing, and rating my writing? Thanks. :)
 
mang9believe said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 5:59 pm
I know how it feels and how it goes...
Your a really good poet.. keep it up*
 
saymysameee33 said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 9:11 pm
its great..the best ive ever heard, this should be published
 
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