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Heart Traffic

February 26, 2015
By AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
18 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts


There once was a boy
Who let his mind wander
Thought he could fly to the moon
Thought, ‘If you try, you’re sure to win’
I hold my head up
While you run me right over
You smile, I cry
And it all begins again
Life is a highway
And you’re my red light
Driving while under the influence
Intoxicated by hate
Will it ever end?
Will this ever end?
No--------no……..
You hold my head under
Give me no reason to hope
To pray for the outcome
I know will never be there
Stay with me, baby
My heart still beats for you
And I still wait for you
Though it’s clear you’re not coming back
Life is a highway
And you’re my red light
Driving while under the influence
Intoxicated by hate
Will it ever end?
Will this ever end?
No--------no……..
When will you ever learn to yield?
This can’t go on much longer
I hope when your fuel runs dry
And you’re by yourself, starting to cry
Remember, our fate is sealed
You are your own
And I am mine……...



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on Apr. 3 2015 at 5:19 pm
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
18 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts

@The_DoctorDonna they ARE song lyrics I wrote:P SCORE!!!:)

on Apr. 3 2015 at 5:03 pm
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
44 articles 2 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"

This is really deep. It sou days like so g lyrics, but, hey, what do I know? Anyway, this is great.

on Apr. 2 2015 at 1:22 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I think you have a lot of emotion and just have to work on flow- getting it out and editing it to make it all smoother. A lot of parts already have a very nice rhythm to them.


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