Scream At The Moon | Teen Ink

Scream At The Moon

February 26, 2015
By AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
18 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts


You’re alone in the dark
Saying, “Don’t cry”
You’re so freaking tired
Of watching your life slide by
I want you to get up and try
You have a life to live
You have so much to give
Listen to me
Live your life
Don’t be afraid
Hold on tight
Forget the mistakes you’ve made
Stand up tall
Don’t drop the ball
Scream at the moon
What have you got to lose?
Steal a car
Speed at midnight
Sleep under the stars
Turn up the volume
I hope that you find yourself
You can’t go back
I need you to be brave
Show me you’re not afraid
Live your life
Don’t be afraid
Hold on tight
Forget the mistakes you’ve made
Stand up tall
Don’t drop the ball
Scream at the moon
What have you got to lose?

Scream it loud

Scream it proud

You are you

What you got to lose?


The author's comments:

Had to write a song for spanish class that had the imperative in it.....but had to write it in English first.^-^


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 6 comments.


Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jul. 20 2015 at 6:10 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

To me at least, this poem is so inspirational. Thank you so much for writing it, it's uplifting and relatable in every way. Don't stop :)

on May. 29 2015 at 6:40 pm
Jewelz2015 BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
1 article 11 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
School is preparation for life. -Christopher Howard

i like this... i can't rhyme but i can place my thoughts

on Apr. 30 2015 at 10:16 am
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

~Love this~

on Apr. 9 2015 at 2:06 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
21 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

Wow! Just wow. That is amazing! But I do agree with Amai on the rhythm. But it's wonderful! Keep it up!

on Apr. 3 2015 at 5:01 pm
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
44 articles 2 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"

I agree with Amai, but other than that this is really really great!

on Apr. 2 2015 at 1:26 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

The only thing I'd suggest here is fixing the rhythm so that there's a fixed syllable count, which would make the rhymes work better.


Smith Summer

Parkland Speaks

Campus Compare