Is it really

February 25, 2015
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Is it really love 

When there is no connection

Is it really war 

That some say is the answer

Or can words

Stop a punch from coming 

Is it really fate that chooses your path

Or is it you that can change it






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Pratt said...
Jul. 10, 2015 at 8:46 am
Wow, gorgeous poem , and amazingly written in short and compact words , from now on you got a die hard fan
 
thisEmilyda1 said...
Jul. 9, 2015 at 12:02 am
Simple but meaningful, I think it flows nicely and is very thought provoking.
 
wilds replied...
Jul. 9, 2015 at 11:11 am
thank you :). im hoping to get better though
 
Hanban12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2015 at 9:51 pm
I think that you could have worded the last line a little differently so that it flows better. Also, I think that if the poem was a bit longer, it could create a more vivid image, therefore making it more memorable. Other than that, I like this a lot, the concept is great. Keep writing!:)
 
wilds replied...
Mar. 30, 2015 at 9:59 am
thank you. I'll try to do better next time. again thank u for the tips.
 
SilverInkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2015 at 10:06 am
its gr8 saw ur message.....u dont need 2 change it............
 
wilds replied...
Mar. 29, 2015 at 6:33 pm
thank you that means a lot to me. and again thanks
 
ageofsherloc said...
Mar. 20, 2015 at 9:56 am
wow. your words mean so much with having to say so little
 
Be_Free said...
Feb. 27, 2015 at 12:39 pm
I really like it. It makes you think, and that is a very good thing. Keep up the good work!
 
wilds replied...
Mar. 2, 2015 at 12:41 pm
thank you. I am Grateful for your comment
 
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