Titanic

January 13, 2009
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One day I got on the most magnificent ship ever built,
I couldn’t believe my eyes, there were so many good looking guys.
As I walked from deck to deck I could not believe what I was seeing,
Everything was so unbelievable.
Then I turned around and there was a guy down there kneeing.
Hey hey hey jack!
Everything was almost perfect, until the worst thing that could’ve possibly happened.
The ship started to sink and all you could see were bodies flying in the air.
Waiting for the ship to go completely under, we stand in the spot where we first met duh!





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Renee170 said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 2:24 pm
Yah, I agree with the other person, what is the duh all about? I don't see why it's needed.....
 
dule_91 said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 11:11 pm
I don't like this as well! Titanic is something much more obviously...
 
clyn12 said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 9:19 pm
I didn't like it. Its quite choppy.

''Waiting for the ship to go completely under, we stand in the spot where we first met duh!''
Is thw 'duh' needed?
 
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