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the heart of the ocean

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The heart of the ocean is the love that never left the heart of Rose,
It symbolizes the love of Jack and Rose, but also symbolizes the sadness and despair.
Of all the lost lives on the Titanic the night she sank to the bottom of the ocean.
This is the heart of the Titanic.
The heart of the people.
The heart of the ocean.
This is the lost love and the lost souls of the tragedy of what happened.
This is the heart that brought two people together.
Two people who fell in love.
The true love that was meant to be but could never be.
This was the heart of the ocean.





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b3ckY!0312 said...
Feb. 12, 2009 at 4:33 am
wow.
thats pretty deep
i dont agree, poetry doesn't have to ryme all the time. i thiought it was great.
only thing is the last line..it doesnt really go with the theme..you tlka about love of 2 and then that being the love of the ocean. then again you wrote it, you know what its means..i like
 
Meli_mel said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 9:20 pm
I wouldn't exactly call this poetry - this is you writing your feelings without applying the traditional grammar rules. I'm not sure I get the underlying theme. You need some work
 
dule_91 said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 11:16 pm
i don't completely agree with what you wrote, their love isn't gone, it's eternal and it will always be...
"I believe that the heart does go on..." - My heart will go on by celinedion
 
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