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What is She?

Why do you always lie to me?
All I asked was for you
To believe in me…
Just tell me the truth

What is She, to you?
Where were you before?
Quit lying to me!
I already know!

I…already…know…

Go ahead and run to her
That’s where you’d rather be anyway

Why do you always lie to me?
Yeah…you’ve said that before…
Why can’t you
Just tell me the truth?!

What is She, to you?
Quit lying to me!
Just tell me the Truth!
I…already…know…

I…already…know…





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kat sevenns aka the author said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 12:37 am
originally this was supposed to be a song. i intend to write out the rest of the story in a longer poem that is unfinished. thanks for your comments. <3 Kat 7s
 
myluvsong182 said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 9:12 pm
i agree with joy26, it seems a little repetitave even tho its short
 
Joy26 said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 12:01 pm
Sounds like song lyrics! Pretty good, but to add more depth and meaning try adding some more verses that depict more of the story?
 
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