Heart's Picture

January 8, 2009
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!


A light shines faintly
Steps walk closer
A feeling of hurt first crosses the person’s path
Then a pang of rage
A pain filled with pity
The complex emotions circulate quickly
The footsteps move faster
The emotions appear, one by one
Anger, hurt, and torment
Each step becomes more difficult
Suddenly, the emotions cloud the light
The darkness becomes more evident
The figure trapped among the emotions
Now sinking, drowning in their fear.

In the prison a desperate cry pierces the darkness
Only to be answered with a cruel laugh
The taunting emotions swirl around their prey
Alone in the darkness
With nothing clear in front of the face
It comes closer
Compacts
Forces the captive into a deeper part of loneliness
As they struggle, the chains are tighter
Then the captive looks up
A look of hope unseen crossing the face
In the distance something approaches
It is a flicker of the tiniest flame of light
But yet brings hope

The feelings are so strong
So well known
Because these feelings collide in one person’s heart
The place so dark in this person’s heart
Of which I know so well
Because the person who lives with these cruel, hateful emotions is me

The author's comments:
This is a metaphorical view of how I see myself and my own heart. It's not very pleasant, but that's the way it has been and probably will always be.

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rshank BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 6:31 pm
rshank BRONZE, San Jose, California
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I like it, but you definitely have a lot of cliche phrases.

on Jun. 25 2009 at 5:48 pm
myluvsong182<3 BRONZE, Harmony, New Jersey
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I love it!! Its very descriptive, and says alot about one person. Great job! :) :) :)

on Jun. 17 2009 at 2:41 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

OMG, this is so cool! You are awesome! If this is true i feel bad...

This really moves me. It's great.

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 12:44 pm
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Quite the pessimist, aren't you? I can't blame you. Intersting phrase: "emotions circulate".


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