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Eternal

January 7, 2009
By Anonymous

Not a hug or a kiss
I give you my love
It is my feelings wrapped in one word
It promises rain
Like the downpour on a child’s face
Here.
It will love you just the same
But unlike any other
It will put your heart
Through aching pain and agony
I am trying to be painless
Not truthful or honest
I give you my love
Its tight grip will hold on to you
Possessive and faithful
As we are
For as long as we are
Take it
Its harsh melody like a love song
If you like
Eternal
Its scent will cling to your soul
Cling to your heart

The author's comments:
well im a freshman in highschool, and kinda nervouse about submitting this, ive never done something like this before, i had to write it for creative writing class, hope you like it!

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VtCd x said...
on Jan. 18 2009 at 2:32 am
Wow, I think this is amazing.


I lovelovelove it!