Commit Suicide

January 7, 2009
By Yadira Vicario BRONZE, Long Island City, New York
Yadira Vicario BRONZE, Long Island City, New York
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Everyday I wake up to a dark room.
I look at myself and see my eyes red and puffy.
I look at my wrist and see that I have cuts.

Every where I turned people would gossip about me.
I tired to ignore them,
But the voices are inside my head and they won't leave.

I had a though past.
Everyone I loved died.
Everyone I cared about stabbed me in the back.

I had no reason to keep living.
From that day forth I decided,
Not to ever love again,
Or care for anyone.

I attempted to kill myself.
I stabbed myself in the stomach,
But I woke up in a white, bright room with the doctor next to me.
I tired drowning myself,
But you came and rescued me like the other times.

You tired to help me,
But I was too stubborn,
You tired to do everything for me,
But I just wouldn't let you.

Little by little I learned how to trust you.
I learned to trust others.
I learned how to care,
And let others care about me.
I learned how to love once more,
And I let you and others love me too,
Knowing what might happen again.

But you thought me how to trust, care, love, and have fate.
Now I trust you with all my guts.
I care about you more than my own life.
I love you with all my heart.
I want you to know that you mean the world to me.
You saved me from the darkness.
Your my Protector.

The author's comments:
Thank You for looking at my poem. I would really appreciate it if you guys commented my work, bad or good it don't matter. Thank You again. ^^

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ellaya said...
on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:28 pm
It's really nice and cool. Keep it(^o^)


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