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The Lake

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The Lake

The glowing dusk stands still

The world like an emerald
This place is heaven

The sun is shining its lights
On this sapphire kingdom
Beauty they call it

The air is silky smooth
The running ruby world above
Scatters across the day and night

The hair on my body stands still
This place has a sparkling sky
The silent world is alive





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Grace said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 3:06 am
Beautifully written> I enjoyed its sense of calmness and beauty like quiet music. I love it!
 
bb said...
Jan. 18, 2009 at 10:10 pm
Beautiful poem. Very calming you feel like you are at the lake with the writer
 
charliedog said...
Jan. 18, 2009 at 4:19 pm
The poem entitled The Lake by David G is magnificently composed. I enjoyed every workd and believe this teenager will be a well known author in the future. Sincerely, Cathy
 
rubycat said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 5:44 pm
These are beautiful words that bring you into the story.
 
deehll said...
Jan. 17, 2009 at 8:34 pm
This is a beautiful poem...I can't wait to hear more!
 
davy9920 said...
Jan. 17, 2009 at 5:04 pm
the reality and peace in this magestic world
 
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