Home Sweet Home This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 7, 2009
A thousand miles from
a place that’s supposed to be a “home”
when it’s just a house
sheltering four people
that have nothing in common
except some DNA.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2009 at 2:39 am
i don't like it so much- i don't really feel the passion or the feelings behind it..
Summersong replied...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 12:25 pm
yea i agree its too straight-to-the-point, ya know try and describe your feeling more but other than that it was good
Valery5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 12:30 pm
I think there was feeling in the poem. i understand it well.Love the poem!
Mikal said...
May 16, 2009 at 1:07 am
Cool! Check out my poems
TKY123 said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 4:00 am
Pretty power and short.
blackamethyst said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 11:21 pm
amazing and powerful. thanks for sharing
Mariah C. said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 7:36 pm
This is incredibly written. Very short but very powerful. I loved it :]. i can relate too. great job :].
meredith P. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 10:17 pm
dot.! said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 2:19 pm
i liked it! short but you put a lot of emotion in 6 lines! can u please please tell me what you think of my work?? TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped thanks!
Babybluelove1 said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 11:40 pm
wow,its short but really goooood great fab writing soon my work will be posted when its on check it out plz!!!
hah..-lhuv-WTF replied...
May 14, 2010 at 10:20 am
wat dhoes short hav 2 dhu wiff iht..lyk seriously?? just playinq haha.. yeah idhu aqree wiff yhu..[[2short, bht awesome]] 
Katrina L. said...
Apr. 4, 2009 at 10:53 pm
It's really good!
oriental_ink said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 7:35 pm
harsh.... very well written :)
ckalani said...
Mar. 29, 2009 at 1:35 am
Very good! Short and Sweet! Tell me what you think of my work...please?
Ciara M. said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 8:42 pm
This is awesome keep it up!
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