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Home Sweet Home MAG

January 7, 2009
By Anonymous

A thousand miles from
a place that’s supposed to be a “home”
when it’s just a house
sheltering four people
that have nothing in common
except some DNA.



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on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:02 am
SickImage SILVER, Klamath Falls, Oregon
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The room was very quiet. I walked over to the TV set and turned it onto a dead channel-white noise at maximum decibels, a fine sound for sleeping, a powerful continuous hiss to drown out everything strange."

How lovely :]

Simple and easy to understand.

Something everyone at some point can relate to

on Aug. 16 2009 at 11:13 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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great poem! I think every kid can relate!

on May. 26 2009 at 6:43 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o," -friends
"Stop saying that!! My name ain't Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!" -Me
"Okay, fine, Hello Cat."-friends
(GRRRRR)
----Also----
"You a turtle on steroids!"-friends
"Hahaha, I know" -ME

Interesting, cant say it is my favorite but you have a talent! Look at a few of mine!!!!!!

on May. 16 2009 at 2:39 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

i don't like it so much- i don't really feel the passion or the feelings behind it..

Mikal SILVER said...
on May. 16 2009 at 1:07 am
Mikal SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 41 comments
Cool! Check out my poems

TKY123 said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 4:00 am
Pretty power and short.

on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:21 pm
amazing and powerful. thanks for sharing

Ciara Murch said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 8:42 pm
Ciara Murch, Buffalo, New York
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This is awesome keep it up!

on Apr. 14 2009 at 7:36 pm
Mariah Carley GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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This is incredibly written. Very short but very powerful. I loved it :]. i can relate too. great job :].

on Apr. 11 2009 at 10:17 pm
horseluva BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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SHORT AND POWERFUL!!!AWESOME!!!

dot.! BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 2:19 pm
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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i liked it! short but you put a lot of emotion in 6 lines! can u please please tell me what you think of my work?? TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped thanks!

on Apr. 9 2009 at 11:40 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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wow,its short but really goooood great fab writing soon my work will be posted when its on check it out plz!!!

TrinaL SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2009 at 10:53 pm
TrinaL SILVER, Mississauga, Other
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What lies behind us and before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us" - Ralph Waldo Emerson.

It's really good!

on Mar. 30 2009 at 7:35 pm
oriental_ink BRONZE, Americus, Georgia
2 articles 8 photos 4 comments
harsh.... very well written :)

KaylaAnne GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 1:35 am
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
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Very good! Short and Sweet! Tell me what you think of my work...please?