My Amazing pool

January 7, 2009
By Cydel Giraudel, Franklin Park, NJ

My pool is so great, so magnificent and fine, the taste is exqusite, the smell fresh of pine. My pool is astonishing with water crystal clear, it fills your heart with joy, leaving no room for fear. My pool is filled filled with magic, it soothes your clouded mind. When you step into my pool, no anger you shall find. So come to my pool, any other is much worse, just 1 more thing, you jump in first.

The author's comments:
I was sitting on the balcony next to the pool while i was reading a book by 1 of my favorite poets. I had an idea just to create a poem myself. I just thought hey i got nothing to lose. So after I finished my poem my teacher said it was outstanding and I should enter it here.

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