Darkness

January 4, 2009
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Darkness is alone,
no friends for comfort.
Devouring the light,
up into the night.






Darkness is beauty,
mysterious and silent.
A whole new light,
but one as twilight.

Not sad,
not despairing,
nor is it wicked.
Darkness is only a point of view,
a matter of opinion.

For me,
darkness is a serene paradise,
beauty and difference.
Darkness is an unknown territory,
forever engulfing light,
into the everlasting realm of shadows.



Darkness,
just sits there,
laughing,
mocking the light.





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AquariusSun&Moon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 10:12 am
I like it! For me the darkness of night is inviting and comforting.
I do however find the end of your poem slightly contradictory to the words "nor is it wicked"... that's the only thing I saw... Otherwise very good!
 
Kashif I. said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:56 am
Really good poem. One of the best I have read here in teen ink, because it conveys your message and feelings so nicely and beautifully.
I have written many poems on darkness myself, and I love your different view on darkness.
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Rob J. said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 5:33 pm
I think it really conveys your idea well.
 
courtcourt889 said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 9:01 pm
thats a good poem
 
hunterdan said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 11:26 pm
hey jared pretty creative really like it. Nice use of fancy words
 
CruElen said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 2:12 pm
Jared, just wanted to let you know what a magnificent and imaginitive mind you have. Keep it that way bud!
 
msimms said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 3:34 pm
What a talent. I am very proud of you Jared! Keep going.
 
Schuler12 said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 1:50 pm
You have a great mind. Keep writing
 
Dallas6 said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 12:43 pm
Excellent poem. Keep up the good work
 
JARED WILSON said...
Jan. 17, 2009 at 2:12 am
Hey! Please rate this! I spent a long time writing it! Thank you!
 
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