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People been tellin me time and time again

I just cant take it anymore

This is a deep regret

Fallin in love with u

Is the worse thing i ever done

The fights,The tears, The heart break

Dont you notice im tired

Im sick of it all cant you see

The only reason im with you

is cuz no matter wat i cant tear you away i need you with me baby

I dont know why but i just want you with me

Im in love with you

and

Im just tired of being away from you




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NommocThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2013 at 9:52 pm:
I loved your poem, but to be perfectly honest with you it's kind of hard to take it very seriously when the grammar is so bad. The thoughts and emotions are perfect just check your grammar. It's just hard to appreciate the amazing thought behind it when the grammar is so awful. I still loved your poem. :) I hope this helps you out with your next poem.
 
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I_need_to_be_fixed said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
Wow this makes a lot of sense. I like how I, along with a lot of other people, can relate too it! Keep up the good work! :)
 
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Mandi C. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 7:17 pm:
thats really good....i feel the same way about someone too...it's deep too it shows how you feel about this one person!!! great job. :)
 
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MR.EHT said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 1:52 pm:
You are really good.
I LOVE THIS ONE.
You have a talent for this you should write a book
 
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babyboo8810 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 8:32 am:
i love this one
 
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greenleaf_floating said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 6:14 pm:
I like this...how you convey the fact that while you dont want to, you can't help being in love with this person. It's a very relatable poem.
 
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Awsomeness said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 3:06 pm:
This is a great poem but its lust not love you care about him but its not love its lust
 
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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 2:42 pm:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 4:19 pm:
Love it. The conflicting emotions and everything is just. . .sensational.
-Blessed Be!
+++ZERO+++
 
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MeghanMichelle said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 6:23 pm:
I love this poem! It describes exactly how I feel.
 
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