She breathes

January 8, 2009
Cupping fire in her palms,
She gasps and breathes,
Inhales the smoke,
Crackling, burning, dying at the edges,
She half smiles and says it feels good.

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wishing4thebest2day said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 8:49 pm
Wow. It makes me think...
snoble said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 3:45 am
wow that was incredably deep for just a few lines...
you are a really good writer
someday931 said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 4:38 am
Your a really good writer
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