Mi Amor

December 19, 2008
By luis cortez, Carrollton, TX

mi amor is spanish for my love.My love has brown hair and brown eyes.
When a guy says"your hot",he`s looking at your body.

When a guy says"your priddy",he`s looking at your face.

when I say "you are beautiful" Iam looking on the inside..


The author's comments:
I wrote this to get something off my chest ok?? If you dont like it,well ok.as long as you like someting,falow your hart,do something right

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 2:10 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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this is amazly good keep it up

Madison_R said...
on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:29 pm
Madison_R, Carrollton, Texas
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I can definitely see where you are going with this poem and I really like it's message.



However, I think if you cleaned up the grammatical and spelling errors, this would make a beautiful poem.




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