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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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Uncundishunal said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 6:28 pm:
Beautiful, you said so much in such little words.
 
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Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:22 pm:
This is very outstanding!! I can really relate to this and probly alot of others that can too.
 
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lil'h3artz said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 9:21 am:
i love it. i wish i could write like you did.
 
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LoveDeep said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 10:16 pm:
Great poem, I loved it.
 
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pitzawonder said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 3:00 pm:
Totally how every lonely girl feels! I absolutely LOVE it. Great job.
 
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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:27 pm:
Beautiful. I especially love these lines "What makes me so unlovable?/Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,/And replace it with a kiss".
 
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LightningForMyAllergies said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 9:21 pm:
Be careful what you wish for! :))
 
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Aderes18 said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 4:01 pm:
This quote just totally describes the way that I feel! Thanks!
 
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to.hold.the.sun This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 12:14 pm:
I feel like this, so much. All of my friends talk about their amazing boyfriends and how in love they are and all I can think is "I want that." I've never even had a boyfriend. No one's ever even asked me out. You conveyed just what I think, and this touched me hard. Keep writing, stay strong, you don't need love when you can write like this!!
 
Melissa G. replied...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 7:52 pm :
Do you really need a boyfriend to complete you happy life. What you really need is a good friend someone to really listen to you and tell you that everthing is going to be alright. If you ever need a true friend look for someone who really cares about you. To have a good life does not mean you need to have a boyfriend to complete it. You got people who really care about you the most not someone boyfriend who can care less. Well I hope you really find happyness in your life and not with a guy at ... (more »)
 
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CallieL said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 12:09 pm:
Wow. That was truly wonderful and well writtten.
 
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RozaB said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 11:58 am:
Definetly a favorite! 
 
Melissa G. replied...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 7:46 pm :
I really love your poem a lot. And I hope some day you will get published and make it big. Keep up the good work and never give up on your dream.
 
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ChristineGeorgia20 said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 7:20 am:
It's great!!well done!
 
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SereStar said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 1:17 am:
This describes my life. Haha, I love it :) 
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 8:04 pm:
idk if i commented on this piece already, but even if i did, i know it just had the same effect. This is a very powerful piece, and also really relatablle. this is clearly the core of everyone's desire. plz keep writingg! u have talent:D
 
harwood3299 replied...
May 26, 2011 at 8:20 am :
this was a very good piece i agree and i bet so do other teen age girls in the world
 
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Wesley D. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:49 am:
knock me over with a feather
 
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starlight26 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 3:45 pm:
No matter how many times I read this, it still has an impact on me. This is amazing. Exactly my point of view..GREAT JOB
 
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vampier said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 2:56 pm:
i know what you are feelng ther that is so strong.
 
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