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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?




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whatsbehindthissmile said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 6:06 pm:
wow, you are really good, this is so deep and emotional! I love this! (:
 
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vampier said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 8:40 am:
that is deep i thak so, so wen you look bak on that bad time you had you plz just reliz it wont over pawer your life if you wont lit it.....
 
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shygirl422 said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 1:12 pm:
there's no words to explain how good this poem was. i enjoyed reading it.
 
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normgrl said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 9:04 pm:

Soon after I read(and reread) your poem, I had the feeling that I instantly had to tell everyone about it! Which I did XD by posting a link on facebook - I hope you don't mind.

It's rather breath-taking how I can easily relate to this poem so very much which is one of the reasons why I loved it.

Good job!

 
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homes14 said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 6:04 pm:
love it, its soo true, great poem.
 
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lala15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 5:41 pm:
totally. im the most un-lovable person alive so i can relate to this.
 
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jelllooo said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
Good poem. i love it and that was the epitome to my life for a long time. but love came around sooner rhen later. it hit me wen i least expected it and who i least expected it from. dont sit around and wait for the storm to pass you gotta learn how to dance in the rain. (:
 
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nika said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 12:59 pm:
i love this poem keep your head up love will come to you
 
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volleyball17 said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 12:50 pm:
omg this is really good
 
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tesswards32 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 12:17 pm:
SO RELATEABLE! great job :)
 
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fragileblackorchid said...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 1:27 pm:
story of my life! lolz great poem
 
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JesBabes said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:58 am:
your poem is amazing!! and i can agree with you totally i can feel what you are feeling.... check out some of my stuff.!! ;)
 
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Uncundishunal said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 6:28 pm:
Beautiful, you said so much in such little words.
 
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Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:22 pm:
This is very outstanding!! I can really relate to this and probly alot of others that can too.
 
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lil'h3artz said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 9:21 am:
i love it. i wish i could write like you did.
 
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LoveDeep said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 10:16 pm:
Great poem, I loved it.
 
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pitzawonder said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 3:00 pm:
Totally how every lonely girl feels! I absolutely LOVE it. Great job.
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:27 pm:
Beautiful. I especially love these lines "What makes me so unlovable?/Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,/And replace it with a kiss".
 
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LightningForMyAllergies said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 9:21 pm:
Be careful what you wish for! :))
 
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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 4:01 pm:
This quote just totally describes the way that I feel! Thanks!
 
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