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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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dr.sexytoaster said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:08 am
this was AMAZING!!!! 
 
dr.sexytoaster(: said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:07 am
dude!!! that was AMAZING!!! CALL ME
 
Sally sunshine said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:06 am
Thats very intense like woah!!!
 
giiiirl please! said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:03 am
I know how you feel giiiiirl! life is short you gotta LIVE girl! LIVE!
 
life4 said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 9:53 am
It's very good because most teens can actually connect to ir i just love your peom
 
Hideing said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 7:46 pm
This is how i feel
 
angelbabe220 said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 1:57 pm

i thought i found my "true love" but there is no such thing as "true love"

 

 
Silently_Outspoken said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:33 pm
This is amazing!! I love the "Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead, and replace it with a kiss." Really beautiful writing. Would you mind looking at my poem? It's my first one that's been posted and I would love some feedback.
 
smile123 said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 8:56 pm
its hard to belive wat u see in movies becuz its acting. all thought out in there mind and then written onto paper. they do something every1 can belive in or have had an close expereance to what they have written
 
MiaCaroline said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 7:29 pm
:O I love it!
 
Nerdy said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 7:25 pm
i love this poem its really good
 
LazyDaisyLovesYou said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 4:34 pm
Awesone job! I know how you feel. I need love too! :) Keep writing!
 
Shortiie16 said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 3:45 pm
This is by far one of the best poems I've read so far,. Keep up with the good work.
 
Anita said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 11:57 am
Awwe that's sad sometimes we love but aren't loved sweet poem Loved it!!!!!!!!
 
Karen kidds said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 11:57 am
This Is A Good Poem It Has A Deep Thought.It Makes You Feel What It's Saying! It has emotion
 
lili said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:15 am
i need some lovin!!
 
literateViolet said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 9:28 am
great poem love is such a cotradiction and at times i feel like this too this is now one of my fav poems oh love why cant you be easy to obtain
 
its.just.kc said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 6:38 pm
Wow, fantastic. I think almost EVERYONE feels like that once in awhile! Love it!!
 
marissa87 said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 6:50 pm
wow. its like you knew exactly what is going on in my head. you put in down in writing. it unmastakably beautiful words. i cnat express how much i love this poem. i think it is fantastic.
 
Muzee3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 7:25 am
>>>Wanting love, not being planned or create a thought to love. But, wanting love, happening to get a new feeling
 
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