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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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belieber said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 6:50 pm
wow! i love this! i like the defective sign replaced with a kiss part! creative!
 
youngspeare said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 8:28 am
Incredible poem you got there :) Keep it up.
Think you could check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past". I would really appreciate your feedback. 
 
mugsy27 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 8:10 pm
this poems so amazing!  i love it, great job :)
 
ifonly303 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 7:03 pm
Wonderful! I really enjoyed this poem I can relate perfectly! Soo Good!
 
ThePeaceDaisy said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 3:37 pm
I need love... :/ oh well i got friends. and this poem rocks, i so relate!!!!!
 
Presley96 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 11:40 am
Such a well written poem. I totally love it and enjoyed reading it
 
EmiliePhillippi said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 8:37 am
Ummm...right here! I also need love like you do! It sucks! I feel desperate...haha...i like this poem.its really heartfelt
 
Gingersnap777 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 8:27 am
Like looking in a mirror!  Great job putting into words what I never could!
 
PRDGirl said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:46 am
When i read i saw me in this poem :)
 
LuviiDovey said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 5:46 pm
I can relate to this poem; well done. I love it.
 
Cosmicpupp said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 7:35 am
story of my life...but this is AWESOME!
 
clairexoxo100 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 11:20 pm
Just  joined and must say that this is one of the most well written and thoughtful poems I've read. Good Job :D
 
WarriorsfanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 8:50 pm
I can completely relate to this!
 
Kpalo14 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 4:44 pm
Very emotional and very true. I loved it :)
 
Chans247 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 7:17 am
I love this poem! It sounds exactically like me right now :P
 
KCayla said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 5:57 am
wow, this is totally relatable. that's exactly how i felt until i met my boyfriend. good job, keep writing. :)
 
dreamer.girl said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 6:13 am
This is Amazing. I love how I can totally relate to it! Awesome job, Keep it up!
 
soldout said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 7:27 pm
yu got the whole package wrapped up right there! and i think it's the same for all of us. love is so artificial these days. Your poem describes how teens in general think about it. five stars :)
 
Innocent angel said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 11:50 am
This is so cute! Very beautiful! Loved it!
 
Basketball24 said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 4:23 pm
This poem is amazing!!! This coming from an eight grade boy who knows how it feels.
 
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