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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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crazy 210 said...
Mar. 13, 2009 at 5:46 pm
I LOVED YOUR POEM! KEEP WRITTING!!
 
Travis G. said...
Mar. 9, 2009 at 9:23 am
that was such a good poem. you really put a lot of heart into it which is the way poems need to be more often. good job and keep writing!
 
Ellie said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 5:04 pm
hey i really like your poems they are really tight you should try and check out mine they are like the same kind of material thanks
 
Poetrywritter said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 4:27 pm
this is really good.
 
.::tinkerbell::. said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 3:12 pm
Very good :)
I usually don't care for poetry but I really like this one.
 
Summersong said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 12:13 am
This is a really good poem!!! You did a great job!!
 
lexikeys247 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 6:23 am
LOVED IT! dont we all feel this way?
 
Sabrina B. said...
Mar. 5, 2009 at 1:48 am
i really enoy this i actually understood it its real good
 
Sam M. said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 11:31 pm
True... so very true *sniff*
 
jeezlouis said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 6:05 am
Joy. This poem speaks truth! Way to tell it like it is. :)
 
Gina K. said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 3:38 am
You will find the right person for you one day. When that happenes you be so happy. Also great poem
 
Bridie said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 9:45 pm
This poem is so true I'm also getting sick of the whole Love Story thing, because that's not the whole Picture for life. I guess that's why I love The Trgedy of Romeo and Juliet so much. If you have time you should read it I think you might enjoy the spin Shakespear puts a spin on the whole quest for happieness.
 
Dannica P. said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 8:06 pm
wow gr8 job...I want my own edward cullen sighs
 
ElizabethS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 10:14 pm
This is so true. Keep writing and editing your work.
 
Amanda S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 11:34 pm
Well said, especially for those of us who still haven't found our prince (or princess) charming. Good luck. :)
 
Anonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 11:10 pm
wow. thanks for that, you know. nobody gets it. were only teenagers. we dont need love right now. whatever. i see what everyine else has and wish i could touch it for one second.
 
Carolyn S. said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 1:32 pm
To Taylorcakes:
Sure! You may use my poem for your poetry anthology! I feel honored. :)
Thank you for your support. Hope English goes well.
Carolyn S.
 
Taylorcakes said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 3:58 am
I loved your poem! And I was wondering if I could use it in a poetry anthology I have to create for my english class?
 
Lauren T. said...
Mar. 12, 2009 at 10:21 pm
great writing! I know exactly how you feel. I can relate to this like you can't believe. I love it keep writing
 
oruga101 said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 11:51 am
Aww. : (
That was sad. It really can be hard not having someone to love, but the longer you have to wait, the more you'll appreciate that first person : )

If you don't mind, please go read, rate, and comment on my poem. Please!

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