Need Love?

December 31, 2008
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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?

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joshua S. said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 5:05 am
its sounds like the person in the poem is ethier ugly or mad with the world said...
Apr. 24, 2009 at 12:51 am
that was ammaaaazing!
pinkvolleyballgirl said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 9:46 pm
Check out iLove by Katelyn H. It has a lot of the same emotions. Super cool=)
music said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 7:42 pm
i really like this poem good job keep it up!!!
Miss.Super-Hyperactive said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 1:06 am
it's insane how so many people(including me) can relate to this poem. Please continue writing you have a gift.
Nightfall said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 12:46 am
This poem is pretty good I believe. There's just something it's missing though. I'm not exactly sure what it is but I know I'm going through the same thing. Yet, there's this aspect, like a spark, that's missing. It just doesn't get to me like it does to everyone else...
Akaeda said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 4:29 pm
Amazing. It is like looking into my own mirror.
tigeress3 said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 10:34 pm
Totally true! Keep up the good work!
Sarah D. said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 12:56 pm
You can't believe how much i can relate to your poem. It is exactly what is on my mind. I love it, its amazing and true, good to know im not the only one feeling that way. Your doing an awesome job, Keep writing:):)
Mrs.Rawlins♥ said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 1:46 pm
these remind me of my poems,*him..." and "her...."
i really liked this one!!
Mikal said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 6:30 am
Ceck out my poems:Living my own life, I need you to be in my life
Shawna said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 5:22 pm
OH this is so wonderful, very creative I loved reading it, you keep working on these poems they are very amazeing
Not_year_but_Forever said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 1:51 am
this is brilliant to me more poems on love should be based on love like time before you should read my poems
Lindsey G. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 6:27 am
Great poem, I loved it!
Big O said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 6:48 pm
yeah i really digged this poem.......its deep. people can be Diagnosed with love and to cure it you need that person to cure your love.........=)
Joyce said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 1:36 am
Yeah! I loved it.
ravenwing92 said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 8:47 pm
I TOTALLY RELATE TO YOU! This is exactly how I feel, almost everyday.
'Tis a very excellent poem of truth. Keep the creativity flowing! =)
Devon P. said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 7:18 pm
Wow You Have Some Real Talent =]
Typo_Queen said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 6:54 pm
I love your poems! All of them actually, your an inspirtion to me.
madi4545 said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 1:43 am
i love it.
you're a beautiful writer
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