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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?




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WanderingChild13 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 12:27 pm:
this is the story of my life.
well done. i love it. <3
 
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Brooktini. said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 12:15 pm:
love this (: your a great writer and its all true. especially with my relationship now
 
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wolf_rose said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 11:57 pm:
yea. i think nearly everyone dreams of a fairytale love! love it!
 
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superswim_19 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 3:22 pm:
Wow, i can totally relate! i have been crushing on this guy and it just blew up in my face! i love the poem!
 
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dreamer54 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 11:48 am:
WOW! beautifully written and a girl's exact words!
 
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xobrittyy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 8:11 am:
omg i can totally relate... this is exactly how i feel great job !
 
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musicgirl95 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 5:58 pm:
hey check out my poems. rate it and comment! PLEASE!
 
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screamingeagle said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 8:44 am:
this is deep
 
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Someone_Who_Is_Loved said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 12:08 pm:
Love this! I am going through the same thing! I feel so un-lovable! :(
 
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itzemilyy said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 5:51 pm:
Wonderful poem you've got here... really makes me think things through. You speak words of truth. [:
 
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xxbri14xx said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 11:46 am:
this is amazing(: and sooo true...
 
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Alicia C. said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:24 pm:
i love it is soooo good :)
 
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CountryGothic said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 2:43 pm:
I really like this, it has a nice flow.
 
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bmmskh said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 10:23 am:
omg this poem is so good it makes a great point.............................
 
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bmmssb said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 10:16 am:
omg this poen is sooo good and it makes a great point im soo with ya.
 
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BMMSOS said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:32 am:
i need it to
most people do
keep writing because your good at it
 
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bmmseb said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:28 am:
GREAT POEM I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITZ AWESOME
 
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BmmsKP said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:27 am:
I Enjoy This Poem.
 
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bmmsaw said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:08 am:
love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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bmmscs said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:08 am:
Ha ha ha Mr Wilson u got told by your own students more like boy messes up girl doesn't forgive Mr. Wilson
 
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