Need Love?

December 31, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
8 articles 24 photos 51 comments

See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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on Sep. 4 2010 at 7:11 pm
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM, Glendale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"-Anonymous
"Thank God men cannot fly, and lay waste to the sky as well as the Earth"-Henry David Thoreau

wow, this was really, just brutally honest.  i enjoyed it.  check out my work?

on Sep. 4 2010 at 6:37 pm
sammyjanee GOLD, Plantsville, Connecticut
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It's funny how at the end you say "Who else in the world could need love like i need love?" Yet everyone who has commented can relate. I loved it!

on Sep. 4 2010 at 11:24 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This feels like me to a t. Help.

Nice poem!


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on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:31 am
-Mz.S- SILVER, Quincy, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
two fingers up & i'm out! ;)

I love this. I can tell it really came from the heart. Great job. :}

on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:30 am
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

can totally relate. like so much. love <3333333

on Sep. 3 2010 at 7:42 am
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE, Spostylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I like to move it, move it."-Anonymous

At one point in my life, I felt this way. 100%. But then I stopped and looked at the bigger picture. The reason why I couldnt find love was because I wouldnt let myself. I had convinced myself that I wasnt capable of loving, so I set myself up for failure in every relationship I had embarked on. Just recently I came to my senses and stopped feeling like this. Now Im happy in my relationship of a year and a half, and I can only thank myself for being happy. Make yourself happy first, then add a boyfriend (or girlfriend.) You are a whole; you dont need someone in your life to complete you.

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on Sep. 2 2010 at 6:18 pm
Bae12 GOLD, Denham Springs, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
don\'t sell yourself so short

love it love it love it!. . . I'm like the millionth person to comment that , but it is what it is. .  straight talent :)

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on Sep. 1 2010 at 7:29 am
Jones, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I Feel ya! nice job! very touching!!! heart warming

on Aug. 30 2010 at 2:00 am
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
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great writing, u jus havent met the right guy yet i use to think the same thing til i met my fiance

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:20 am
i liked ur poem. very inspirational. i know wat u mean i feel the same way sometimes :]

on Aug. 28 2010 at 8:55 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which
procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt
i'm F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

i know exactly how you feel! u see all these people together around and think ur defective in some way trust me itll get bettter. <3

 

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:09 am
J.Dawson GOLD, Connersville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you. You hurt me again and again, but I love you"-Reality Bites

It's good. Nice work.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:45 pm
Hipsley23 BRONZE, Salineville, Ohio
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Live Your Life C.r.A.z.Y And L.O.V.E Every Second :)

I Love This Poem Keep Up The Good Work.

on Aug. 13 2010 at 11:46 pm
KevinM PLATINUM, Xxxxx, Arkansas
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i love this poem it is so deep and it speaks right to how i feel sometimes keep up the good work. can you check out some of my poems. this poem is going on my fav. lists

on Aug. 13 2010 at 9:50 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

you were able to capture my exact same feelings, great rhyme scheme and use of rhetorical queries... reads some of mine perchance?

on Aug. 13 2010 at 9:58 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

all i have to say is this is amazing and i love it great ob!!

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on Aug. 7 2010 at 11:08 pm
kamarin, Dayton, Ohio
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very relatable it was amazing

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:56 pm
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."

Very nice.

on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:04 am
shootingdreams SILVER, Paoli, Pennsylvania
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I agree! i need love. *sigh.

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:05 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I loved this, amazing. Keep it up. ;D


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