Need Love?

December 31, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
8 articles 24 photos 51 comments

See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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ebee123 SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 6:40 pm
ebee123 SILVER, Rochester, Minnesota
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I really like this. Very,very strong ending.

on Oct. 7 2010 at 10:31 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Drop The World....." Or "Everything Happens For A Reason....." Or "I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world."

Wow....this is very beautiful......And it's true....Which is what makes it even better cuz you can relate to it......So bravo you deserve five stars......

J.Dawson GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:08 pm
J.Dawson GOLD, Connersville, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you. You hurt me again and again, but I love you"-Reality Bites

Agreed. After you feel it, it feels like a necessity for life. With out it, you're just....empty

on Oct. 4 2010 at 1:34 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

This is really good ! I love the concept . Please check and rate my work ? :)

on Oct. 4 2010 at 8:11 am
RAWRimNIKKI BRONZE, Spring, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
As depression takes over, no one can help just let it do as it does and what is best is to let them be

this is really good, life wouldnt be worth living if there wasnt love. Once you have felt it, you need it.

on Oct. 3 2010 at 10:18 am
britttttlynn SILVER, Crestline, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe

everyone needs love. life would be pointless without love. i do lovee this poem.

on Oct. 1 2010 at 12:07 pm
it sound beautiful it make me think about me and my parents

34stifler said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 12:03 pm
It sounds like someone that need love in their life

Tankmurdof said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 11:50 am
This poem makes me feel better about a lot of things

Kururu966 said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 11:40 am
This poem was perfect I read it many times.

-Mz.S- SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 3:41 pm
-Mz.S- SILVER, Quincy, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
two fingers up & i'm out! ;)

Everything about this poem is perfect. I love it. :)

on Sep. 26 2010 at 10:05 pm
i have been without love for a very long time and when i read this i realized that there is still hope

on Sep. 26 2010 at 5:40 pm
Emmaleigh BRONZE, Muscoda, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the going gets tough, and the tough get going, I am left still standing.

This is so pretty! and so ture. i love how it leaves and effect on you, and it's relatable. Nice work

on Sep. 26 2010 at 4:59 pm
nickieeeexd BRONZE, Nw, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
" if there ever comes a day when we can’t be together,
keep me in your heart, i’ll stay there forever "
--winnie the pooh♥

more like girl meets boy, boy messes up </3

on Sep. 26 2010 at 2:34 pm
totaly relatable an very well written

on Sep. 22 2010 at 6:00 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

LOVEEEEEEEEEEE it.....its soo relatable.....i love the ending line....and lemme tell u...i soo know wat u mean....trust me..lol...i love how brutally honest it is....and it flows nicely...

on Sep. 15 2010 at 2:55 pm
SingleGal SILVER, Huntsville, Arkansas
5 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
PEACE LOVE DEATH

I can relate to it very well!!! GREAT JOB

2 pretty said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:45 am
I liked this peom because their were many people who could relate to this poem. and felt this way at one point of time.

mamaangle said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 8:06 pm
mamaangle, Detroit, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I LIKE THIS I FELL THE SAME WAY

on Sep. 8 2010 at 8:54 pm
SwallowedByInsanity PLATINUM, Hillsdale, New Jersey
22 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is a poison, but it is also the antidote."

I liked it, because it seems easy to relate to, and yet, everyone had something different on their mind as they read through it. Loved every line <3


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