Need Love?

December 31, 2008
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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?

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xXBrokenxNightmareXx said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 10:31 am
Wow....this is very beautiful......And it's true....Which is what makes it even better cuz you can relate to it......So bravo you deserve five stars......
ReenSmiley said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Agreed. After you feel it, it feels like a necessity for life. With out it, you're just....empty
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 1:34 pm
This is really good ! I love the concept . Please check and rate my work ? :)
THATxONExKID said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:11 am
this is really good, life wouldnt be worth living if there wasnt love. Once you have felt it, you need it.
IJustWannaSmile said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 10:18 am
everyone needs love. life would be pointless without love. i do lovee this poem.
flocka flames said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 12:07 pm
it sound beautiful it make me think about me and my parents
34stifler said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 12:03 pm
It sounds like someone that need love in their life
Tankmurdof said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 11:50 am
This poem makes me feel better about a lot of things
Kururu966 said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 11:40 am
This poem was perfect I read it many times.
Ally-Angel-Eyes said...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 3:41 pm
Everything about this poem is perfect. I love it. :)
footballguy19 said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 10:05 pm
i have been without love for a very long time and when i read this i realized that there is still hope
Emmaleigh said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 5:40 pm
This is so pretty! and so ture. i love how it leaves and effect on you, and it's relatable. Nice work
nickieeeexd said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 4:59 pm
more like girl meets boy, boy messes up </3
BrokenInnocence said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 2:34 pm
totaly relatable an very well written
LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 6:00 pm
LOVEEEEEEEEEEE it.....its soo relatable.....i love the ending line....and lemme tell u...i soo know wat u love how brutally honest it is....and it flows nicely...
MattsGurl said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 2:55 pm
I can relate to it very well!!! GREAT JOB
2 pretty said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:45 am
I liked this peom because their were many people who could relate to this poem. and felt this way at one point of time.
Toni M. said...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 8:06 pm
blondnbrilliant This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 8:54 pm
I liked it, because it seems easy to relate to, and yet, everyone had something different on their mind as they read through it. Loved every line <3
Jellybean9898 said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 7:11 pm
wow, this was really, just brutally honest.  i enjoyed it.  check out my work?
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