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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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giggles88 said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 2:36 pm
dang thats so sad and i feel the same way.
 
Friggi said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 7:54 pm
Scars upon the heart are beauty marks
 
believer16 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:11 pm
omg same heree:(
 
splenda. said...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 6:17 pm
you put my feeligs into words. there is know way to explain how "unlovale" i feel. but hey, guys our age arent really into "big" girls, are they?
 
poeticenigma said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 7:25 pm
Oh my goodness, this is awesome! Your poem actually brought tears of joy to my eyes it was so good. I love how it's so deep (for lack of a better word), but it's also so simple, and shows you really believe in what you're writing. I appreciate you writing this and sharing it with us.
 
ellebellyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 5:03 pm
wow i totally know what you are coming from and i love what you did in this. very good;)
 
Solo_DoloKidd said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 6:53 am
i understand you, coming from the same huge hot city....that you can never get too much of...including love
 
polyprincess16 said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 4:32 pm
wow this was awesome & very relatable...i am always reading books or watching movies and it makes love seem so easy & im always daydreaming of having the same thing they show in hollywood
 
Dancer7 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 4:23 pm
i totally agree wit u
 
just-a-joy said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 1:00 pm
i understand what your talking about the waiting an the hoping
 
BABe724 said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 4:16 pm
i can totally relate. i keep reading books and, seeing movies about this unending love that can get you through anything. i mean who wouldnt want that?  
 
tweety1ofakind said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 8:04 pm
geez that was so deep !! you are amazing !! i can completely relate to this !!
 
ShytoyaB said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 8:20 pm
i completely love this poem...your a great writer
 
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:21 am

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u ♥

 
forgottenpenname This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 8:46 pm
Absolutely gorgeous!
 
Nanner said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 1:35 pm
I love this poem, and how you made it so easy for anyone to relate to. Don't worry, God has someone special in store for you! In the meantime, keep writing! :)
 
inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 9:29 pm
i can identify with this SO MUCH!!!!! this is a perfect blend of poetry and prose and you can really feel the emotion. My fav line was "can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead/and replace it with a kiss." Great work!! Check out some of mine?
 
Brooklynn said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 9:26 pm
great job!!! i really liked it and it makes so much sense! i loved it and you should def keep writing bc you have some major talent!
 
Alexis7674 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 8:51 pm
that was an amazingly good poem
 
Joyful_angel said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 8:40 pm

wow! this poem is really deep!

i really like it!~ you did really good

keep writting. if you can, can you check out some of my poems???

great job~

 
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