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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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Imma_Be_Amazing said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 12:15 pm
This is totally true if you dont let yourself love then how will you find it?
 
mrzx.daniels replied...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 12:02 pm
i kno thats right cause i am in luv wit someone know and we got alot of hataz out hur so try to keep yo man
 
apurplechick said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 8:24 am
this is really cool i feel this way sometimes
 
Erica B. said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 6:40 pm
I really like this. Very,very strong ending.
 
xXBrokenxNightmareXx said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 10:31 am
Wow....this is very beautiful......And it's true....Which is what makes it even better cuz you can relate to it......So bravo you deserve five stars......
 
ReenSmileyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Agreed. After you feel it, it feels like a necessity for life. With out it, you're just....empty
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 1:34 pm
This is really good ! I love the concept . Please check and rate my work ? :)
 
THATxONExKID said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:11 am
this is really good, life wouldnt be worth living if there wasnt love. Once you have felt it, you need it.
 
IJustWannaSmile said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 10:18 am
everyone needs love. life would be pointless without love. i do lovee this poem.
 
flocka flames said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 12:07 pm
it sound beautiful it make me think about me and my parents
 
34stifler said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 12:03 pm
It sounds like someone that need love in their life
 
Tankmurdof said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 11:50 am
This poem makes me feel better about a lot of things
 
Kururu966 said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 11:40 am
This poem was perfect I read it many times.
 
Ally-Angel-Eyes said...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 3:41 pm
Everything about this poem is perfect. I love it. :)
 
footballguy19 said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 10:05 pm
i have been without love for a very long time and when i read this i realized that there is still hope
 
Emmaleigh said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 5:40 pm
This is so pretty! and so ture. i love how it leaves and effect on you, and it's relatable. Nice work
 
nickieeeexd said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 4:59 pm
more like girl meets boy, boy messes up </3
 
BrokenInnocence said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 2:34 pm
totaly relatable an very well written
 
LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 6:00 pm
LOVEEEEEEEEEEE it.....its soo relatable.....i love the ending line....and lemme tell u...i soo know wat u mean....trust me..lol...i love how brutally honest it is....and it flows nicely...
 
MattsGurl said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 2:55 pm
I can relate to it very well!!! GREAT JOB
 
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