Need Love?

December 31, 2008
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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?

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polyprincess16 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 11:36 pm
I love this. So many people can relate to it, and that's why this so easily pulls at our heartstrings..
polyprincess16 replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 3:05 pm
I can relate to the need for a pure love that you can never seem to find, and the sadness that comes with not having that kind of love...
Pancakes said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 2:52 pm
love is an unconcerable feeling and hard to come by but when  you get it you will know.
poetface said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 2:50 pm
Awesome! I felt like it pulled the words right from my head. I've asked myself the same questions. I LOVE THIS
kbrown said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 8:11 am
Love what need of it to pass time.. no just the need of feeling ever so deeply.. not love the word is used to much to mean anything
tsinger07 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 2:38 am
OMG this is fantastic! I can relate to this so well and the poem as a whole is just amazing.  This writing is the piece that will touch so many teens out there who feel this way but never say a word. Keep on writing!
dreamerz said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 9:54 pm

Really really good! I can relate... =) 

Check out my work on my original screen name, ElleNicole? I just posted a poem called Change and I need wayyy more feedback... thank you so much if you do! 

Annipooh said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 3:18 pm
I loved t. it's truely amazing and i can relate.
-DreamForever- said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 8:45 pm
I am in love with this. It describes me perfectly. Great job!
K.M.S.Shear said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 6:50 am
i loved it.
endend1210 said...
May 27, 2011 at 9:46 am
This poem is pretty good. What makes  it so good is that it expresses a feeling that, assuming, everyone who commented or voted, including me, can relate to. It's a part of growing up :)
liviebug66 said...
May 26, 2011 at 8:35 pm
This is awesome! How A LOT of people feel!
Lola_Black replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 8:16 pm
I agree completely!
nikkigonefishin said...
May 26, 2011 at 8:32 pm
This is AWESOME!! Amazing how much it reminds me of myself. Thanks for capturing the true essence of the need for love :)
RhythmAndRhyme said...
May 26, 2011 at 4:10 pm
This is amazing! I love the thought you put into it. The touches of humor aren't bad, either. You just totally described the story of my life in this work. Nice job on this!
May 26, 2011 at 11:57 am
Shortblueeyes224 said...
May 26, 2011 at 11:32 am
Good Job :)
SamiLou said...
May 26, 2011 at 10:53 am
I love this, it sounds too much like me!
Dragonrenji said...
May 26, 2011 at 9:00 am
I can completely relate to this....I think you just wrote out what my heart wants to say. A master piece in deed.  
Grace4297 said...
May 26, 2011 at 8:07 am
I can completely relate to this. You wrote it perfectly. I'm not sure what else to say. Wonderful piece.
onevoice said...
May 20, 2011 at 6:43 pm
I think you just wrote out what my heart wants to say. (:
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