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The emotions..
That I dare not express..
The tears that i shed internally..
The opportunities that i overlook daily..
The smiles as we pass..
The thoughts of you being mine..
The pain that flows throughout me as I watch you with another person..
The desire for you to be mine..
Or even.. the lust..
The one chance that i hope to possess..
if only just once..
The mind within your body that i long to change..
The hug that i will never accept..
The lips that I will never grace..
The past was never good to me..
But you are the present..
You are the future that I want..
The future that is haunted by the ghost of the past..
The same past..
That was never good to me..



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Annabelle294 said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Love it! I felt really captured by the words.
 
kms777 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 6:21 pm
absolutly breathtaking!!!! i dont think anyone could have wrote it or said it any better. i kinda wonder what inspired you to write this because i think i could relate to it perfectly. i hope youll read some of mine and tell me what i need to work on so i can start writing like this. its so magnificent!!!!
 
hope18 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 10:10 am

i really liked you poem. it expressed the hurt and courage you experience with love and taking the risk to love

 

 
AshlynSerora said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 10:38 pm
...wow...give me a second to stop crying haha jeez word for word you have completely pulled what I felt and put it on paper. I could never in my life capture that sinking feeling the way you have in this one simple poem. I love it. Though I have to say that this definately isn't something someone can pull out of thin air but rather bases on experience. It's beautiful.
 
jessa_mae said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 9:06 pm
one of my favorites definitly :) great job
 
kiska_puppy11 said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 10:18 am
Wow... this is great!
 
EdytD said...
Mar. 25, 2009 at 11:02 pm
wow. great job - it is a little twisted, but i definitely see where you're coming from. i can almost feel your thoughts - reading the poem gets my blood pumping...
 
~SennaRae~ said...
Mar. 13, 2009 at 10:20 pm
You hit the nail on the head! I really related to your poem and it really moved me! I have to believe that everything with work out in the end... but sometimes it's so hard! Thanx for writing this poem, you expressed it better than I ever could!
 
Jess H. said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 5:42 am
beautiful. in a twisted way. its amazing.
 
swimchix12 said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 1:59 am
I love this!!
 
xXdarkloverXx said...
Feb. 9, 2009 at 5:51 pm
Wow that is really great I have the same thing going on
 
godfreyp said...
Jan. 12, 2009 at 2:09 am
thanks. :)
 
xxJustxxme said...
Jan. 10, 2009 at 9:48 pm
This is really good! ^_^
 
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