See Me

December 30, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
8 articles 24 photos 51 comments

So.
What is it you want from me?
There has got to be something I do not see.
The way you look at her,
to me, I wish you would do the same.
I do not want to be just another girl
on your long list of a game.
What is so different about me
that makes it impossible to see
that I am a real person as well
with feelings
thoughts
emotions
cares
a life...
but still love.
and time
that I want to give to you.

But to you, it is like receiving a single rose
after someone gave you ten dozen.

What makes me different, you may ask.
I am simply
not
like
them.

Take a chance on me...
maybe you will see.
That I'm worth another glance,
but I won't give you a second chance.
Now or never.
no time like the present hour.

I just want to know.
what you see,
when you
see me.



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on May. 11 2015 at 9:48 am
AllyssaWrites BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"why do you deserve happy ending? Out of seven billion people, someone has to suffer."

After a bad break up recently with a two-year long relationship, I know this feeling and you did a great job putting it into words.

on Aug. 8 2012 at 5:12 pm
Mistreated BRONZE, Cayucous, California
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Favorite Quote:
“Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. You playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won’t feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine as children do. It’s not just in some of us; it is in everyone. And as we let our own lights shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others”.

Your peom was amazing, i loved it and i got how u felt this can speak to so many girls. Great job :)

on May. 15 2011 at 3:34 pm
jasmine66 BRONZE, China, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"you can do more win a war then win an earthquake"

Your a great writing and I would love to see more :)

on Dec. 13 2010 at 4:07 pm
HeartbrokenAngel BRONZE, Cottonwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Do you know how much I wish I could go back in time and change so many things? The first one is you."

I have to agree with the addiction. It's a good thing that they don't have AA meetings for peotry addicts.

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on Nov. 23 2010 at 5:41 pm
chillifritoz, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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all of your writings remind me of the way that weed smelled in my dream on day it was delicious! lol your work is so goooood!

on Sep. 26 2010 at 9:25 pm
LoveLikeEpic GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"You got enemies? Good, that means you actually stood up for something in you life"-Eminem
How can i go forward if i dont know which way im facing?-John Lennon

Addicting poetry.

Love it.

Wish I could write as good as you!

You have an amazing way with words!


on Mar. 16 2010 at 10:10 pm
ResistMe PLATINUM, New Tazewell, Tennessee
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I'm going to be honest,

I'm addicted to your work.

You have a wonderful talent.

BreeBree said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 11:33 am
BreeBree, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“I love people who make me laugh. I honestly think it's the thing I like most, to laugh. It cures a multitude of ills. It's probably the most important thing in a person.”
~~ Audrey Hepburn quote

Embrace what makes you different.
~ Tim Mcilrath

Look at the stars. they're the same stars as last week, last year, same as when we were kids. When we weren't even born. in a hundred years, no one will ever know who we are, but they'll know those same stars.

I can really relste to this poem a lot! ^_^

Chautel said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 1:47 pm
Chautel, Bolingbrook, Illinois
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again its EXACTLY how i FEEL

carijoy SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 4:53 pm
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Thank you so much for your comments and encouragement! I really appreciate it. I'm glad people can relate to and gain hope from my work.

melone96 said...
on Nov. 22 2009 at 6:30 pm
melone96, White Sulphur Springs, West Virginia
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I love your writing! It is so amazing and inspiring! Thank you! I've connected with your poems on a whole new level and this gives me some happiness and hope! Keep writing more!!!

on May. 28 2009 at 10:26 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

WOW! this is really deep. i feel like i could relate to this. because all "boys" ever did was like me because of my looks or my physical features. i thought i would never find the one that loved me for me! and i thought all boys were the same. but they're are not! trust me! lol there is someone out there im sure for you, waiting to sweep you of your feet. if he hasnt already!good job!!

on May. 8 2009 at 12:37 am
softballNracin BRONZE, Covington, Virginia
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mmfdg623 is right. I am always the person a guy looks over so I totally understand. Compare me to my friend We may both be really out going but all the time she outshines me when I stand by her so most of the time guys look over me and unto her and say stuff like "Wow"!!! So I really do understand! You are a GREAT writer! keep up the great work!

Batwoman GOLD said...
on May. 7 2009 at 11:59 pm
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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This poem really hits close to my heart. Right now I'm in the middle of a situation just like the one you described and it's hard. But he's got a girlfriend so I don't really have a chance. And besides I'm always the girl with her head buried in a book so not many guys notice me anyway. So even if he was single I still wouldn't really have a chance.

on May. 6 2009 at 10:55 pm
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
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i just read all ur work and this one ties with the rest of ur work. i am so jealous!! great job!!! ;D

mmfdg623 GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 12:34 am
mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
Louisa May Alcott

I love this poem, and I know exactly what you mean. I am the girl that the guys overlook, especially since my best friend is a lot more outgoing than I am. Keep up the good work.

on Apr. 19 2009 at 12:31 am
writingis4ever PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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i really like this! great writing! :)

carijoy SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 11:18 pm
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Thank you all for your kind words. :) You are all truly inspiring.



To EdytD:

I know exactly what you mean. Someday, someone will get it. :) and he will be the "coolest" guy of all.



Carolyn

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 2:38 am
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I liked it, and I can definitely relate - as someone who's priorities are academic, i am often passed over as nobody from the "cooler" guys.

on Mar. 9 2009 at 2:04 am
luvyellow33 GOLD, Hoffman Estates, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Whatever dont kill you will only make you stronger

WOW every poem you do is so amazing. Great job, and keep writing




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