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Afternoon

January 3, 2009
By Anonymous

The sun, shimmering,



Sparkiling






Shining.

The sind, blowing,



Breathing,





Billowing.

The clouds, rolling,




Roaming,





Rocking.


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on Jan. 20 2009 at 12:57 pm
Thanks for your comment! I'm glad you like it so much. Those were both typos and I meant wind when I said sind. Thanks so much for your comment!

Joy26 said...
on Jan. 17 2009 at 2:34 am
Really cool how you rhyme the words and space it to create such a free-flowing, windy poem!! I love it. Fyi, it's spelled "sparkling," and I'm not exactly sure what a "sind" is?! :)