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I. Have. A. Question.

October 30, 2014
By Ryushi BRONZE, New City, New York
Ryushi BRONZE, New City, New York
3 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rome Wasn't Built in a Day


Does it take one flicker to start the spark?
A golden wolf followed by the pack of dark.
The flame that flickers in the dark.

Can one flower make a bouquet?
Even if only one was sent?
Does it take one flicker to start the spark?.

If a crow, could fly alone.
Would we still call it a murder?
The flame that flickers in the dark.

If a child left unattended, could be kempt and clothed.
Could you tell he was not loved?
Does it take one flicker to start the spark?

Every second that passes by.
Is it possible to not shed a lie?
The flame that flickers in the dark.

Are you really saving a life?
With just a simple sacrifice?
Does it take one flicker to start the spark?
The flame that flickers in the dark.


The author's comments:

As always, love to have constructive criticism. It will improve my writing. Also help structure the abstractness of the mind.


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Ryushi BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 6:58 pm
Ryushi BRONZE, New City, New York
3 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rome Wasn't Built in a Day

Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it. I Hope to write more.

on Nov. 5 2014 at 7:38 am
lastingbreath16 DIAMOND, Lake Alfred, Florida
54 articles 3 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
screw it all if life gives u lemons do what ever you feel the need to do with them.

Wow to me this was amazing!!! The entire concept of the poem is beautiful. You did amazing and i really hope you keep writing. 


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