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Because before you know it, you'll be holding your breath; looking around for answers. You'll be gasping for air, fighting back tears. Why? I don't know. A part of you is always with your past. It affects you. People say forgive and forget, but it's definitely a lot easier said than done. And it feels like when I finally begin to forget it all I get slammed right back to the ground. And everything comes back. My problems aren't as bad as many people's out there, I know. I'm not saying they are. I know it's not the end of the world but writing is my way out of my problems. I wish I could trust. Trust myself, life's obstacles, people. Everything and anything.





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xcblue44x said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 8:31 pm
Lol.
 
PaloVerde1 said...
Jun. 29, 2009 at 2:56 pm
It's okay, but it's not a poem.
 
kianapearl said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 6:38 am
I like this a lot. I didn't think it had the feel of a poem, though, more like the random thoughts of a poetic person. It was definitely deep. You speak from the heart and you can't go wrong with that, lol. Keep writing!:)
 
project827 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 8:17 pm
good stuff, cassie. a very nice little prose poem, I loved it.
 
lollygager101 said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 6:10 am
Awesome entry it shows true feelings but in differentwords.
 
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