Helpmeout?

December 6, 2008
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Im spiraling down, and down.
Into this pit of nothing...
I need you're guidance.
HELP ME OUT!

I need you're light.
I want out.
Keep me tight.
This maybe be our last, our first...
Our forever...

Dreaming of you when i fall into this
slumber.
I wanted, waited for us.
GET ME UP!

I wont leave you,
I wouldn't think of it.
Just come back.
I miss what we had.
what we were.


OH MY GOD!
HELP ME GET TO WHERE I CAN BE
ME!
All i ever wanted was to make her happy.

But now it's all a...
wreck.


I need you.
I shut you out.
Forgive me.





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mel07 said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 3:59 am
I really liked the beginning a lot but then I kinda got bored. Just on that part though, your overall writing style is good in my opinion.
 
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