December 19, 2008
I’m writing you a letter.
It’s a secret; don’t tell.
Maybe it will be better
now that you cannot yell.
The same tears fill my eyes.
A lump grows in my throat.
I can’t help but cry
for the dear heart you broke.
My love, how you mangle
those you hold so dear.
I’m no longer entangled
and I see oh so clear.

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SharpestSatire said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 2:43 pm
man, that is so depressing. you really captured this poor person's feelings. (and i meant 'depressing' in a good way, if that makes sense) great job!!!!
Supernova;) said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 8:06 pm
you're really good i love all your poems
vamppoet16 said...
May 30, 2009 at 7:23 pm
I really like this one. You'e really good.
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2009 at 1:33 am
short but filled with power and emotion! I love this.
Katrina O. said...
May 13, 2009 at 10:56 pm
I just read one of your other poems, and now this one. Wow, your poems are inspiring. i love everything about your poem..the style is perfect, the words, the meaning, ect. You have a real talent for your writing style.
steffanie H. said...
May 13, 2009 at 6:30 pm
this is really good...pleez write more
sara H. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 12:24 am
:D your extremely good. :]
keep it up. just write what you believe
Madi G. said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 10:07 pm
again, it's a true 5 star poem! :D:D:D
JessyWeLoveYou said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 3:06 pm
again holly crap...emotion pores out of theos words..i almost cried...
Xx_kishka_xX said...
Mar. 17, 2009 at 1:05 am
Wow. I read your other poems, too. Keep it up you're good ^.^
Dezi Yaz :) said...
Mar. 5, 2009 at 3:56 pm
This is a really awesome poem... keep on writting.
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