Better

December 19, 2008
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I’m writing you a letter.
It’s a secret; don’t tell.
Maybe it will be better
now that you cannot yell.
The same tears fill my eyes.
A lump grows in my throat.
I can’t help but cry
for the dear heart you broke.
My love, how you mangle
those you hold so dear.
I’m no longer entangled
and I see oh so clear.


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on Jan. 30 2010 at 2:43 pm
man, that is so depressing. you really captured this poor person's feelings. (and i meant 'depressing' in a good way, if that makes sense) great job!!!!

on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:06 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

you're really good i love all your poems

on May. 30 2009 at 7:23 pm
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

I really like this one. You'e really good.

on May. 14 2009 at 1:33 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

short but filled with power and emotion! I love this.

on May. 13 2009 at 10:56 pm
one_of_a_kind_girl GOLD, N/A, California
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I just read one of your other poems, and now this one. Wow, your poems are inspiring. i love everything about your poem..the style is perfect, the words, the meaning, ect. You have a real talent for your writing style.

on May. 13 2009 at 6:30 pm
steffanie hetherington BRONZE, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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this is really good...pleez write more

on Apr. 18 2009 at 12:24 am
sara holzen GOLD, Tomball, Texas
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:D your extremely good. :]

keep it up. just write what you believe

on Mar. 26 2009 at 10:07 pm
Miss_Independent GOLD, Keller, Texas
18 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked.

again, it's a true 5 star poem! :D:D:D

on Mar. 24 2009 at 3:06 pm
mamacassx33 BRONZE, Rotterdam, New York
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again holly crap...emotion pores out of theos words..i almost cried...

on Mar. 17 2009 at 1:05 am
Xx_kishka_xX BRONZE, Eatonville, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 8 comments
Wow. I read your other poems, too. Keep it up you're good ^.^

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on Mar. 5 2009 at 3:56 pm
This is a really awesome poem... keep on writting.


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