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I’m writing you a letter.
It’s a secret; don’t tell.
Maybe it will be better
now that you cannot yell.
The same tears fill my eyes.
A lump grows in my throat.
I can’t help but cry
for the dear heart you broke.
My love, how you mangle
those you hold so dear.
I’m no longer entangled
and I see oh so clear.



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girlwithpower18 said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 8:35 pm:
I really enjoy your work because even with simple words you make a powerful meaning, very nice.
 
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FrenchHippie said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 5:34 pm:
Wow, this is so beautiful and powerful. I understand just how you feel
 
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publicdomain said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 9:57 am:
 I have read all of your work but this one is my favorite I really liked it. Keep writing. Great job.
 
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RanaHewezi1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 8:10 pm:
Great job! i can actually relate :)
 
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Untamable said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:59 pm:
nice it doesn't just express how you feel but the reader can relate as well i like this peace
 
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Kelli_2011This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 3:40 pm:
NICE seriously better than mine i have to say!
 
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Slecc said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 4:42 pm:
i love ur poems... ur an amazing writer!!
 
Soup44 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 8:13 pm :
I Agree you are a fantastic writer!!!!
 
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JustYourAverageDork said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 9:14 am:
I really love this poem and how its short but you can get a lot out of it.
 
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HopelessSharpie said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 3:51 pm:
o ym gosh, this poem is amzing, but thats not why im commenting, i mean all your poems are amazing and youve heard that so much, but you live in Clifton? Clifton, VA? I coulld't believe it! I live here to, I go to school just around the corner. I would love to know where it was you went to school  or work but im guessing your still in school.
 
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Escaped said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 2:20 pm:
favorite of all your poems
 
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May 30, 2010 at 12:40 pm :
This is my favorite of yours. Well, "Jerk" and this one is a tie. But I love them.
 
LiVIng.4.LoVE replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 12:16 pm :
same i love jerk and this one as well. you're a very clever writer
 
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Whisperer said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 1:34 pm:
i really like this. it explains alot and i can kind of relate to it :) good work
 
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hrsegrl said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 12:36 pm:
this is a great poem! It shows a lot of love, and i just ah-bsolutely love it!
xoxo: Hrsegrl
 
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kmpoetgirl7 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 10:30 pm:
That's incredible. The emotion runs deep and i can relate to that really well. :) Great work. Comment on my stuff if you want
 
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blankpages12 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 10:31 am:
wow...that is amazing are you talking about love like realtionship or just in genral...cause that reminds me so much of an abusive past family member i had...wow
 
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SharpestSatire said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 2:43 pm:
man, that is so depressing. you really captured this poor person's feelings. (and i meant 'depressing' in a good way, if that makes sense) great job!!!!
 
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Supernova;) said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 8:06 pm:
you're really good i love all your poems
 
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vamppoet16 said...
May 30, 2009 at 7:23 pm:
I really like this one. You'e really good.
 
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