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Let these petals be your guide,
don’t fear to shed that tear;
You’ll be safe on this path,
That I know…
don’t fear of falling,
‘cause someone’s there to catch you;
You are beautiful,
Like golden roses on the snowy ground,
A face that hides beneath the petals,
Is more golden then those roses
You gave me,
I know I’m wasting my time
Writing this;
But these golden roses are just
Wilted by the frown on your face,
The once golden rose; now black as night,
Fears the outside…
Fears everything we are…





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lexi said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 5:03 pm
hey cat just me, umm. i really like this but i think one line could be made more poetic. the "dont fear of falling" could be made of falling dont fear, so that it ryhmes with the line "dont fear to shed that tear" keep going strong! love you!
 
door_holder_girl said...
Jan. 4, 2009 at 8:16 pm
Best poet of Eternity awarded to...Kataria! This poem means a lot to me...
 
be{lie}ve1821 said...
Jan. 3, 2009 at 5:07 am
wow that is so meaningfull
 
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