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Falling For You

My breathing slows
My arms pulse
My legs break
My eyes blackout
My mind shatters
My blood drains

All I can think about is
I hope you know I love you

I hear whispers and I know its you
I feel pain and I know its for you
I can’t see and I know you’d want it that way
I smell your cologne and I know you’re close to me now

Then it all fades and the pain grows stronger
As I realize
You weren’t coming for me
My sight comes back and I see you
Walking off in the sunset with someone else





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Angela said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 4:53 am
Thank you so much! I love you all. And Cougar737, anything you say goes. lol
 
cougar737 said...
Jan. 4, 2009 at 2:14 am
woa very nice and very deep....i like the theme and the feeling put into this poem..well done
 
Angela said...
Jan. 3, 2009 at 4:32 am
I wrote this baby!
 
AmandaVampire said...
Jan. 1, 2009 at 7:18 am
Your poem is absolutely amazing! :D
 
Ashleyyyyyyy(: said...
Dec. 31, 2008 at 3:37 am
Dude, Angela.... Thats Saddddd!!! I read the end and almost cried dude... I swear if thats about a certain person I am gunna bust there nuts so just lemme know kk.
 
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