The Other Side of Valentines Day

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What a glorious day for every lover
With no worries and no cares
But to stop and listen,
Listen to the silence,
The silence as cold as Death,
But do not fear, it won't hurt you,
It's just a person without a heart.

Be happy, laugh, and jump around,
Just don't rub it in our faces,
Because we can't be changed.

We are the icy cold feeling you get when you're alone.
We are the fear that makes you want to scream at night.
We are the living.
We are the disfigured and tormented.
We are the ones without hearts.
We, are the Other Side of Valentines Day.





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Lulu R. M. Sorrows said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 4:30 pm
Thank you all for taking the time to read my work, and to comment. Of course, I will keep writing poetry, and my stories. If my poems are bad, tell me, and I will improve on what work needs to be done. I plan to see one of my poems in the top 5-10-20, I would love to see that happen. With the help of you fellow poets, please help me achieve that goal. And I shall help you all do the same.

Lulu R. M. Sorrows~
 
brookej said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 5:47 pm
hey Lulu I so love this poem and I know that you know its my favorite of yours. keep writin those awesometastic poems cuz I love reading them
 
Lulu R.M. Sorrows said...
Jan. 9, 2009 at 2:13 am
Thank you guys for the comments on my poem, I appreciate comments on my work, surly I will keep writing, and submitting, but please, continue to comment on my work, and I will comment on yours. :]

Lulu R. M. Sorrows~
 
kianapearl said...
Dec. 26, 2008 at 9:32 am
I can totally relate to this poem. It's great. Keep writing:)
 
artofthedeath said...
Dec. 26, 2008 at 4:13 am
I know what you mean. I felt like that every year until last year when I had a valentine. But, hey, we live on. This is not something we need to ponder over. Although I do understand the empty lonely feeling in your gut and heart. =(
 
shadowpoet said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 9:33 pm
dang this is deep girl... super deep..
 
a fan said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 9:05 pm
interesting...I like it!
 
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