Fear, Abandonment and Aloneness

December 16, 2008
Fear is as an enemy.
Abandonment is a broken heart.
Aloneness is a shadow in the darkness.
Fear seeks no mercy.
Abandonment sees no evil.
Aloneness seeks a humble, happy soul.
Fear cries for once courage.
Abandonment runs toward our mind.
Aloneness crawls on my spine.
Fear sneeks quickly but slow into romance.
Abandonment never could hurt worse or be so cocky.
Aloneness sees your pain, not.
Fear, Abandonment and Aloneness seem to be close friends.

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Riverine14 said...
Dec. 30, 2008 at 9:32 pm
I really like your poem. It flows and has a certain rythm that fits it's topic. One thing I would like to point out is that aloneness is also lonliness. Just my opinion but I think it sounds better. Feel free to check out my poems and rate and leave comments on them. Just type in Brittany A in the names boxes and Pinedale in the city box. i would really appreciate it if you would read and rate my stuff. Thanks and best of luck in your life.
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