Who Are You To Say Who I Am

December 16, 2008
who are you to say who I am
with your lies and rumors
I believed you but then it happened
you took over my life and made someone that I wasn't so who are you to say who I am
I was original but now I am a clone and all because of you
I became fake and now I am fake
I say who and what I am
I am saying bye to you and your lies and saying hello to Me
the one you tried to erase
You are no one to say who I am
I say who I am NOT YOU

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Brooke J. said...
Jan. 15, 2009 at 1:54 pm
Thank you guys so much for commenting and voting for my poems. Please tell me how good or bad they are. Criticism is a good thing. As long as you keep reading them I will keep writing them.
Thank-you Brooke J.
SaraO. said...
Jan. 15, 2009 at 1:53 pm
gurl keeep up the work and keep posting i love this poem
Lulu R. M. Sorrows said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 5:05 pm
I loved this poem Brooke, I have never read anything that I couldn't understand. Its great, keep writing. :]
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