December 16, 2008
By Rachel Daniel, Millbrook, AL

Is she the reason you ignore me
Are you and her meant to be
Is she the reason you don't love me anymore
Is she why my heart is sore
Does she do more than i can
To her, are you the best man
Is she a better listener
Does she talk about you as much as i do
Does she use the three little words: I love you
Does she see what i see
I will love you till the day i die
Will she?

The author's comments:
The thing that inspired me to write this poem is all the bad relationships I've been through where the guy has cheated on me. I wrote this to one guy in particular because he is the one that broke my heart the most.

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myluvsong182 said...
on Dec. 23 2008 at 7:27 pm
aww, i feel your pain girl...ive also had bad relationships where my guys would leave me 4 anothr girl. It reely hurts, but it doesnt go away unless som type of closure is done. Its times like those that remind me of a very important quote ive heard b4..."You cannot learn to be brave if you've only had good things happen to you"...hope this helps ya girl:)


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