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Almost Lost

September 15, 2014
By _em26 SILVER, Milltown,
_em26 SILVER, Milltown,
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Once we accept our limits, we must go beyond them. -Albert Einstein


We were lost

They told us

And

We would never make it

They said

All because

We forgot our prior lives

Turning to electronics instead

No more

Laughter, love, and morals

We focused on

Materialistic views of life

Ignoring

What really mattered

Making changes based on

What we thought was right

We did

We struggled

To fix our mistakes

It was almost too late

 

(Now read from bottom to top.)



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_em26 SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2014 at 4:22 pm
_em26 SILVER, Milltown,
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Once we accept our limits, we must go beyond them. -Albert Einstein

AHH OMG thank you so much!!

on Oct. 21 2014 at 5:45 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

OH MY GOSH. I LOOOOOOVVEEE THIS!!! Ah-em, sorry for my enthusiasm lol. This is great! I love backwards poetry, it has two amazing meanings, and this flowed really well both ways! I have always found it really hard to make these, so hats off to you! The beautiful message magnifies your talent tenfold, so... KEEP WRITING :D    *\(^_^)/*