Free Minded

Welcome to a perfect place
Where the grass is always green
People live without a trace,
And there's no such thing as mean.

Welcome to a friendly land
Where it's safe to be just you,
Talking on the warm beach sand
And watching the sun set too.

Welcome to a postcard view
Where mountains are tall and bright
Everyday is warm and new,
Always a beautiful sight.

Welcome to everlasting love
Where family and friends roam
To be your protective glove,
And make you feel at home.

Welcome to my World!





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t. burlison said...
Jun. 22, 2009 at 10:03 pm
I am so glad you have found a place for your writing. "Free Minded" is an excellent piece-- I especially like the line containing "protective glove." Keep writing and sharing!
 
spidey said...
Dec. 30, 2008 at 5:28 pm
Great job.....very nice writing.
 
Grandpa1 said...
Dec. 24, 2008 at 1:08 am
Very good Monica, Love You.
 
Orca30 said...
Dec. 23, 2008 at 10:52 pm
Beautiful poem. Brought tears to my eyes.
 
tinker said...
Dec. 23, 2008 at 10:42 pm
This is a great poem, gave me goose bumps...congrats!!!!!
 
mojokorb said...
Dec. 23, 2008 at 10:14 pm
EEEEK!!!!! YAY!!! awesome :)!!
 
guitar214 replied...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 4:25 pm
this is a really good piece. It flows well and has good imagery. great job
 
mojokorb replied...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 9:44 pm
thank you so much!
 
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