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Free Minded

December 14, 2008
By RaWrL0v3 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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RaWrL0v3 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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"Love is anterior to life, posterior to death, initial to creation, and the exponent of breath."

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Welcome to a perfect place
Where the grass is always green
People live without a trace,
And there's no such thing as mean.

Welcome to a friendly land
Where it's safe to be just you,
Talking on the warm beach sand
And watching the sun set too.

Welcome to a postcard view
Where mountains are tall and bright
Everyday is warm and new,
Always a beautiful sight.

Welcome to everlasting love
Where family and friends roam
To be your protective glove,
And make you feel at home.

Welcome to my World!

© Keri-Lynn R., Germantown, NY

The author's comments:
I actually wrote this for a competion that my english teacher showed me and it won a place in their book(youngwritersofamerica) I was so happy but I want your guy's opinions on my work. Tell me why I won!!!!
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RaWrL0v3 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 9:44 pm
RaWrL0v3 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
4 articles 42 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is anterior to life, posterior to death, initial to creation, and the exponent of breath."

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thank you so much!
guitar214 SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 4:25 pm
guitar214 SILVER, Skokie, Illinois
9 articles 3 photos 1 comment

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"Don't be afraid to be yourself"

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this is a really good piece. It flows well and has good imagery. great job
t. burlison said...
on Jun. 22 2009 at 10:03 pm
I am so glad you have found a place for your writing. "Free Minded" is an excellent piece-- I especially like the line containing "protective glove." Keep writing and sharing!
spidey said...
on Dec. 30 2008 at 5:28 pm
Great job.....very nice writing.
Grandpa1 said...
on Dec. 24 2008 at 1:08 am
Very good Monica, Love You.
Orca30 said...
on Dec. 23 2008 at 10:52 pm
Beautiful poem. Brought tears to my eyes.
tinker said...
on Dec. 23 2008 at 10:42 pm
This is a great poem, gave me goose bumps...congrats!!!!!
mojokorb said...
on Dec. 23 2008 at 10:14 pm
EEEEK!!!!! YAY!!! awesome :)!!