Quiet Thoughts

ohmygod. this is like how i am right now.

Short. So what! I think its really good. I love that you could put meanings into something so short Great job!

Short and Sweeet ^_^ i loved it this is going on my fav lists if thats okay!

Good job! Very sweet.

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its so sad but its very good 0.O

^_^ This is very good.

I liked it a lot, all around!

i like it. does 'that's the end of it' mean that's the end of life?

I feel like you're trying too hard to seem deep and broken. Show the reader, don't tell the reader. Keep writing!

I like it, but it seems like somthing is missing because of the abrupt ending. But i love the beginning and middle parts! it has great emotion and feeling.

I like it! It's short and sweet....I really like the idea of it being an excerpt. It has a lot of meaning to it and I could feel it. Great job!

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Great poem!I liked the, My heart is made of glass and it already shattered part and it seemed even better the second time through. Keep up the good work!

i see that you made it onto the polpular list several times. good job. keep posting. see ya around town.

I really like it! First time through I thought it was kind of morbid - "I can't take this life...it's the end" but it's actually kind of sweet, like you're putting it all behind you and welcoming a brand new start. Nice job!