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My heart is made of glass,

and it already shattered.

My heart is a million pieces on the ground,

and it hurts.

My feelings are now more vulnerable then ever.

I can't take this life anymore.

That's the end of it.



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krazeecasey13 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 8:01 pm:
ohmygod. this is like how i am right now.
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 10:06 am:
Short. So what! I think its really good. I love that you could put meanings into something so short Great job!
 
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[(*InSiDeRr99*)] said...
Aug. 24, 2009 at 7:29 pm:
Short and Sweeet ^_^ i loved it this is going on my fav lists if thats okay!
 
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GlassHeart said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 9:45 pm:
Good job! Very sweet.
 
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Kristen H. said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 8:25 pm:
check out- TeenInk.com/search.php?raw=raw
 
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girlzrool1992 said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 2:58 pm:
its so sad but its very good 0.O
 
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Torrzilla said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 2:07 am:
^_^ This is very good.
 
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awesomeaugust This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 9:22 pm:
I liked it a lot, all around!
 
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out.of.hope said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 6:41 pm:
i like it. does 'that's the end of it' mean that's the end of life?
 
PK4evr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:00 pm :
Basically, it has dual meaning: That's the end of life and that's all I have to say. -Natalie
 
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Kinnery said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 9:01 pm:
I feel like you're trying too hard to seem deep and broken. Show the reader, don't tell the reader. Keep writing!
 
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Swimgirl said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 1:07 am:
I like it, but it seems like somthing is missing because of the abrupt ending. But i love the beginning and middle parts! it has great emotion and feeling.
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 5:20 pm:
I like it! It's short and sweet....I really like the idea of it being an excerpt. It has a lot of meaning to it and I could feel it. Great job!

~~If you have time, please check out my work. Add a comment and rate it if you wish. Thanks!
 
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Bob W. said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 12:38 pm:
Great poem!I liked the, My heart is made of glass and it already shattered part and it seemed even better the second time through. Keep up the good work!
 
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TheOtherGuyFromAllen221 said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 7:33 pm:
i see that you made it onto the polpular list several times. good job. keep posting. see ya around town.
 
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Joy26 said...
Jan. 17, 2009 at 2:39 am:
I really like it! First time through I thought it was kind of morbid - "I can't take this life...it's the end" but it's actually kind of sweet, like you're putting it all behind you and welcoming a brand new start. Nice job!
 
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